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Please improve customer invitation email

Jackie Roos 4 years ago in General 0

Current email:

Dear User !

You are invited to iRidium Cloud project by Jackie Roos (jackie@jamware.co.nz).

Project name: Direct10 v3

Now you can use this project in your iRidium pro.

To start using your project, open this letter on your iOS or Android-based device and click here (or install the iRidium pro

)


Please make much more explicit and change to something like this


You are invited to iRidium Cloud project by Jackie Roos (jackie@jamware.co.nz).

Project name: Direct10 v3


To use this project

1. Go to http://www.iridiummobile.net/my-account/ and create and register and activate an account

2. Install the iRidium pro (i3 pro) app from Google Play, the App Store or Download here for Windows: http://www.iridiummobile.net/download/software/v3/

3. Run i3 pro and log in with the same credentials used in step one

4. Open this email on your Windows, iOS or Android device and click here



And To make this even better please

1. create an i3 pro download for Windows in the downloads section, and link directly to that in step 2

2. create a direct link to the registration page for step 1.


thanks